Post by -|~Cassandra Fisher~|- on Dec 27, 2005 10:50:11 GMT -5
Whisper Of Betrayal
By: Sierra Tam
Created: December 25, 2005
Updated: December 26, 2005
Summary: World War Three has began. Commander Cruger, Sky, Bridge, Z, Sydney, Jack, Kat, Boom, Sophie and Alejandrina get called on to fight against Lord Gruumm who wants to take Earth for his own purposes. Will Earth win the battle or will Lord Gruumm win?
Disclaimer: I do not have any rights to these characters, wish I did, then lots of things would be different. They belong to Saban and Disney.
Author’s Note: This story is an AU. Which mean that the Rangers are not Rangers in this world. Commander Cruger never had a wife. He became a Commander to his hard work.
Author Note 2: I have tweaked this chapter as best as I could, I hope that you all enjoy reading it. Dreamweaver I have to say this, I would like it better if you would have signed in and left me this review. I have a few things to say to you... since I can’t e-mail the comments to you then I guess everyone is going to hear what I have to say to you. This is in no means to be mean or rude. It’s just what I want to say to you. First off if you’re not brave enough to sign in, I will take into consideration what you say, but it might be most likely depend on what the review that you left for me. I might just ignore the suggestions. If you have a problem with the way I write why not become my beta reader. You assume too much…just because I have all the characters in the story doesn’t mean that I am going to have them pair up automatically. Her name is Alejandrina not pronounced as Alexandria. This story is an AU, which meant that SPD isn’t in this story. It’s Earth Forces. Also everyone lives in peace on earth and there not need for a large military force on earth. Lastly I would have to say that saying Alejandrina is a Mary Sue, I think that wrong of you to say that. You just read one chapter of a story and you are judging my character even before you get to know her. That’s really not fair. You are being prejudice.
Rating: M+
Jack looked over at his wife Z; she was lovely. They had been married for two years now. Z was doing her workout along with their friend Sydney. Sky and Sydney were their best friends. They were actually their next-door neighbors. Bridge on the other hand live a few blocks away from them. Sophie a friend of theirs lived a blocked away from Bridge. Kat and Boom, who where dating, lived in an apartment across town. Doggie Cruger was at work; he was the Commander of the Earth Forces. Alejandrina who was also their friend, they didn’t know much about her. She gave them her cellphone number to be reached at. They tried to trace the cellphone number down; they came to a dead end. They decided to leave the matter of trying to find out more about Alejandrina alone.
Lord Gruumm looked at the screen he was going to get earth, he wanted to conquer the universe. He had almost the entire universe conquered that was with the exception of Earth. He was going to have earth, in the end, even if he died trying.
Alejandrina was injured badly, the fight against Lord Gruumm had failed, and her world had been destroyed. She had nowhere to run to. All the planets that are her allies were under Lord Gruumm control. She had made it to Earth Forces Headquarter. She saw Doggie Cruger there, she approached him. Doggie Cruger had the cadets running laps when he notice Alejandrina who looked to be in bad shape. He moved quickly over to her side.
“Rina, are you okay?” Doggie Cruger asked her softly. She looked at him gave him a weak smile. Rina was everyone nickname for her. That was when Cruger noticed that she was dress like a Queen.
”I am okay, just a few cuts and bruises.” Rina told Doggie.
“What happened?” Cruger asked her.
“Lord Gruumm destroyed my home.” Rina said, as tears threaten to come. Cruger gave her a weird look.
“Earth is your home isn’t it?” Cruger asked.
“No, my home is Lyxielnaah, it was destroyed by Lord Gruumm three days ago, I can to warn you that he going to come attack earth.” Rina told him. Cruger made sure that Rina got to the infirmary, then he went to call the President of the United States, this was a matter of Nation Security. He waited for the President to take his call.
“Commander Cruger is there any news about the Lord Gruumm situation.” The President of the Untied Stated asked, with a worry look on his face.
“Only that he has now decided to come take over earth.” Cruger told him. The President didn’t look happy at all.
“I’ll inform everyone.” The President of the United State said, as he got off he contact the other country and gave them the news. They were going to announce it to their country as soon as they get off the phone.
Bridge and Sophie were watching television, when the screen went blank and the President of the United State appeared on the screen.
“Guys you better come and see this.” Bridge said. They all went to the living room and gather around the television.
"My fellow citizen, we are going to be under attack by Lord Gruumm soon. I don’t know when he going to attack, but when he does we will be ready to fight back. I am asking for all volunteers who want to fight to report to you’re nearest Earth Force Base or if you close to the Earth Force Headquarter to report there. We need as many volunteer as we can get. Thank you!” The President of the United State said, as the screen went back to the regular program.
“I am volunteering to fight against Lord Gruumm.” Sky said.
“So am I.” Z said, as she got a determine look on her face.
“I’ll see if they need help in the technical area.” Kat said, as she decided to start gathering all her belonging that she would need to help fight against Lord Gruumm.
“I’ll come with you.” Sophie replied.
"I want to help as well, so I am going with you guys." Boom said.
"Count me in." Bridge said. Everyone looked at Jack and Sydney.
"I’m going with you guys, don't think I will stay here while you guys are off saving the earth." Sydney said. Jack knew one way or another that he was going to get roped in to fight. Jack shrugged his shoulder and sighed, and then everyone headed to Earth Force Headquarter.
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I hope that everyone like the updates that I made to chapter on of Whisper of Betrayal. If you decided to review…thank you. If you review and you are mean or rude about it, your review(s) will be fueling my fire in my fireplace. If you have an ideas, suggestions or you just want to let me know what you think of my story then you can leave a review, e-mail me or send me a PM. Now it’s off to write Chapter Two!
By: Sierra Tam
Created: December 25, 2005
Updated: December 26, 2005
Summary: World War Three has began. Commander Cruger, Sky, Bridge, Z, Sydney, Jack, Kat, Boom, Sophie and Alejandrina get called on to fight against Lord Gruumm who wants to take Earth for his own purposes. Will Earth win the battle or will Lord Gruumm win?
Disclaimer: I do not have any rights to these characters, wish I did, then lots of things would be different. They belong to Saban and Disney.
Author’s Note: This story is an AU. Which mean that the Rangers are not Rangers in this world. Commander Cruger never had a wife. He became a Commander to his hard work.
Author Note 2: I have tweaked this chapter as best as I could, I hope that you all enjoy reading it. Dreamweaver I have to say this, I would like it better if you would have signed in and left me this review. I have a few things to say to you... since I can’t e-mail the comments to you then I guess everyone is going to hear what I have to say to you. This is in no means to be mean or rude. It’s just what I want to say to you. First off if you’re not brave enough to sign in, I will take into consideration what you say, but it might be most likely depend on what the review that you left for me. I might just ignore the suggestions. If you have a problem with the way I write why not become my beta reader. You assume too much…just because I have all the characters in the story doesn’t mean that I am going to have them pair up automatically. Her name is Alejandrina not pronounced as Alexandria. This story is an AU, which meant that SPD isn’t in this story. It’s Earth Forces. Also everyone lives in peace on earth and there not need for a large military force on earth. Lastly I would have to say that saying Alejandrina is a Mary Sue, I think that wrong of you to say that. You just read one chapter of a story and you are judging my character even before you get to know her. That’s really not fair. You are being prejudice.
Rating: M+
Jack looked over at his wife Z; she was lovely. They had been married for two years now. Z was doing her workout along with their friend Sydney. Sky and Sydney were their best friends. They were actually their next-door neighbors. Bridge on the other hand live a few blocks away from them. Sophie a friend of theirs lived a blocked away from Bridge. Kat and Boom, who where dating, lived in an apartment across town. Doggie Cruger was at work; he was the Commander of the Earth Forces. Alejandrina who was also their friend, they didn’t know much about her. She gave them her cellphone number to be reached at. They tried to trace the cellphone number down; they came to a dead end. They decided to leave the matter of trying to find out more about Alejandrina alone.
Lord Gruumm looked at the screen he was going to get earth, he wanted to conquer the universe. He had almost the entire universe conquered that was with the exception of Earth. He was going to have earth, in the end, even if he died trying.
Alejandrina was injured badly, the fight against Lord Gruumm had failed, and her world had been destroyed. She had nowhere to run to. All the planets that are her allies were under Lord Gruumm control. She had made it to Earth Forces Headquarter. She saw Doggie Cruger there, she approached him. Doggie Cruger had the cadets running laps when he notice Alejandrina who looked to be in bad shape. He moved quickly over to her side.
“Rina, are you okay?” Doggie Cruger asked her softly. She looked at him gave him a weak smile. Rina was everyone nickname for her. That was when Cruger noticed that she was dress like a Queen.
”I am okay, just a few cuts and bruises.” Rina told Doggie.
“What happened?” Cruger asked her.
“Lord Gruumm destroyed my home.” Rina said, as tears threaten to come. Cruger gave her a weird look.
“Earth is your home isn’t it?” Cruger asked.
“No, my home is Lyxielnaah, it was destroyed by Lord Gruumm three days ago, I can to warn you that he going to come attack earth.” Rina told him. Cruger made sure that Rina got to the infirmary, then he went to call the President of the United States, this was a matter of Nation Security. He waited for the President to take his call.
“Commander Cruger is there any news about the Lord Gruumm situation.” The President of the Untied Stated asked, with a worry look on his face.
“Only that he has now decided to come take over earth.” Cruger told him. The President didn’t look happy at all.
“I’ll inform everyone.” The President of the United State said, as he got off he contact the other country and gave them the news. They were going to announce it to their country as soon as they get off the phone.
Bridge and Sophie were watching television, when the screen went blank and the President of the United State appeared on the screen.
“Guys you better come and see this.” Bridge said. They all went to the living room and gather around the television.
"My fellow citizen, we are going to be under attack by Lord Gruumm soon. I don’t know when he going to attack, but when he does we will be ready to fight back. I am asking for all volunteers who want to fight to report to you’re nearest Earth Force Base or if you close to the Earth Force Headquarter to report there. We need as many volunteer as we can get. Thank you!” The President of the United State said, as the screen went back to the regular program.
“I am volunteering to fight against Lord Gruumm.” Sky said.
“So am I.” Z said, as she got a determine look on her face.
“I’ll see if they need help in the technical area.” Kat said, as she decided to start gathering all her belonging that she would need to help fight against Lord Gruumm.
“I’ll come with you.” Sophie replied.
"I want to help as well, so I am going with you guys." Boom said.
"Count me in." Bridge said. Everyone looked at Jack and Sydney.
"I’m going with you guys, don't think I will stay here while you guys are off saving the earth." Sydney said. Jack knew one way or another that he was going to get roped in to fight. Jack shrugged his shoulder and sighed, and then everyone headed to Earth Force Headquarter.
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I hope that everyone like the updates that I made to chapter on of Whisper of Betrayal. If you decided to review…thank you. If you review and you are mean or rude about it, your review(s) will be fueling my fire in my fireplace. If you have an ideas, suggestions or you just want to let me know what you think of my story then you can leave a review, e-mail me or send me a PM. Now it’s off to write Chapter Two!
